To be perfectly honest, I really like the idea behind it, and that all of the different vowels and diphthongs make sense in their placement. However, there are two big issues with this.
- How small or sloppy can they be written before it becomes difficult to read?
- It's just too hard to remember all of these combinations. I know mine seems a bit silly/arbitrary, but it also loosely allows for triphthongs (for example, you could easily write la .tuein. as two letters, even though UEI isn't -technically- a valid diacritic), whereas I can't quite figure those out in yours. So I don't think that convolution necessarily makes something better. The idea behind it is really good, and I'd like to see you (Huggles, paf, and anybody else interested) take off with it. It'll be like the cyrillic to my Latin, and while I may be a butthurt whiny-baby about it, I think that a fair bit of competition is good, and it's linguistic darwinism in that one of them eventually will be better and the other one will probably get dropped (or at least Loglan'd).
So, please continue on with this huggles-lermorna and work on the details. If you come up with a name for it and a sufficient body of work to explain it, then either you or I can make a video regarding it much like I've done with larlermorna, and of course I can let CC Elian know about the variant script and ask his opinion of it.
Kinda take my video as a blueprint and do the various examples of your non-diacritic thing that you're doing so I can see exactly how dot-placement is done. You need to write full bridi, show how cmene are written, illustrate various UI and other cmavo, and so on.
I encourage you to seriously stress-test this, especially with those complex diphthong characters that you have. Write it as small as possible, write it HUGE, write it very neat, write it very sloppy, in bubble letters, while drunk, while sleepy, on a small pad of paper using your thigh as a rest while you're standing up, and see where it starts to break apart.
...hmmmm...
kurlermorna ???